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[CedarBranch]

I know I disapproved this before, but I'm now having second thoughts about my reasons.

Basically, my reasons are starting to sound abstract to me, so I'm letting this one slide, mostly because they [my reasons] would be more useful to mention in a level review, plus they are STILL ABSTRACT REASONS for disapproving a level.

These were my original reasons, so please consider them: show

->Moderate sprite spam. (Several cases involve totally harmless enemies, or where enemies were placed in mid-air, sometimes killing themselves. The issue that really stands out though is with the Sling Star. There is a rather long trail of assorted coins, AND ALL OF THEM ARE MISSED.)
->A lack of effort is conceivable in this level. (This is especially evident when considering the issue with the Sling Star, which also makes you skip a large portion of the level. Another problem is that there are no decorations at all, and yet another one is the strong lack of challenge due to an overuse of Blue Coins.)

Additional advice: Be very careful to avoid cutoff. The level before this one had to be disapproved because of extensive Grass Tile cutoff.
If you are unsure about what to look out for, consider this: Try making sure all tiles have full, black outlines and that there aren't any spaces "cut open," with or without an outline (most common with background or lava tiles.).



EDIT: Why did you edit out the [code] tags from the level code in your post? There's no point in editing it back in if you're just going to end up taking it out once more, but the level won't work on the in-game Level Portal if the level code isn't correctly in-between [ code ] [ /code ] tags.

[Thomas100]

If I would put a smiley for this, this is what it would be... " "

There are cutoff tiles, a horrible Sling Star shot and overuse of enemies...
Please don't overuse enemies and make those flame thrower things in midair