Ep.1

[ZeriX]

Ep.1
Bowser has got a new plan.You need to stop him!
Ep.1-Near To Castle Level-1

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[lordpat]

So, I thought I may write a review for this level.

Gameplay:
I liked the platforming bits in the level, though I think the level could be arrenged to be beaten without the fludd. If it just makes the level much more of a breeze, and most jumps could be made without it anyway. The level also suffered from lag, which could be solved by adding a level transition in the middle of the level (along some changes to make it work, obviously). I also noticed a bit of enemy spam with the flying shy guys (with the columns of seven or eight shy guys all put together), they were innecesary and didn't make the level harder. I would recommend cutting them down, as that would also help reduce the lag. Besides that, the platforming was good and it worked as it should.

Graphics:
The level looked simple and fine, I liked it. It wasn't anything impressive, but it was kept as it should be.

Overall:
I did enjoy the level, though I would recommend fixing some issues. I am gonna give you for stars.
Wish ya the best.
~Lordpat.

EDIT: Also, I forgot. I recommend putting the shine star at the end of the level, since backtracking is a bit annoying and the way the level is constructed it doesn't add much.