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Atlantis Island

PostPosted: March 20th, 2014, 12:12 am
by ZION LEVELS
Atlantis
Island
Sorry if something is wrong in this game I'm a beginner and I'm only at grade 3.
Please rate this level. That's All :) .


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Re: <font size="30">Atlantis Island</f

PostPosted: March 21st, 2014, 1:35 pm
by Raiyuuni
First off, just how old are you, exactly? No matter what your answer is, however, it might be a little overwhelming if I just land a full-scale review on what I just saw.

Here it goes. *cleans throat*

So I was hanging at our local guild of epicness while this certain LeMod (a.k.a. Level Moderator) sent us a link regarding this very thread Even though it's a level far away from perfection, it's a hell of a good start.

Why? You've shown us you either have acquired some experience from somewhere else or have read through some of the tutorials legends left for the Newgenerations to discover. This early into the level designer, and you're already handling basic HTML and graphic gimmicks.

Still, sticking only to the teachings of Deidara (Art is a blast!) isn't going to help, as several others before and even I once attempted on many different ways. A level is more than just complex scenery such as a banner that just passes by on a member's signature. It demands time and patience from the adventurers. I can't deny it's unimportant, but most people are in it for the challenge, and thus, running in a straight line with an army coming their way with a secret pipe as their only hope to escape isn't attractive. (Mario can destroy whatever number of minions on his way. The Fighting Polygons are proof for that since 1999)

But it reveals effort above all things.

So, how to handle this massive amount of time and patience? To put things short: Moderation in all things is the key. A simple and concise backstory, even if it's just about defeating the ultimate villains, some well-timed tricky platforming and, above all else, adjusting item spawns to prevent lags are the way to go. Rule number one: there is always a player with a worse PC than ours.

Lecture finished, awarding time.

Enjoy these simple stars and have a nice leap into Runouw.com.

★★★★✰


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Re: <font size="30">Atlantis Island</f

PostPosted: March 23rd, 2014, 1:50 am
by ZION LEVELS
My Age Is Only 9 and i'll be grade 4 on june