Minecraft

[luigifreak]

Minecraft
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's been a while,but here I am! Here's this level's Prologue:Steve spawns in a weird looking tree,and goes on the biggest adventure of his life!He meets Morlern,an old friend of Watchitt(from Super Paper Mario)mayor of Yold Town.I haven't figured out everything,but here's the first part.Hope you enjoy it!

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[Harmless]

If there's one thing I would absolutely beg you to do for this level, it would be to please, please, PLEASE test your levels, and consider if there is something that needs to be fixed in the level. Think about how another player would respond and act when playing the level. Would they get confused here? Would this set of platforms be too hard for a general audience? And similar.

Personally, the level felt very sloppy and was not made with enough care. Please try being more diverse with the stuff that the level designer gives you, and please fix up any cutoff and graphical errors that are prominent in the level.

[Ninewr]

This is good but needs better transitions. Think through your levels more and you will be a great level designer.