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Posted: **August 4th, 2014, 1:47 pm**

The Undiscovered Jungle
I didn't add coins just for an extra challenge.

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Posted: **August 5th, 2014, 3:01 pm**

Overall, this wasn't a bad level, but it definitely did not have much going for it, either. There were quite a lot more boos than were needed, since not all of them presented much of a threat. Using cave tiles without some kind of transition is also glaring. I also don't understand the point of the drop at the end, as there's not really a way to die, unless you hug the big boo near the shine sprite.

Posted: **August 9th, 2014, 7:49 pm**

Hey dude, im just a beginner

Posted: **August 9th, 2014, 9:38 pm**

I understand that. I was just stating some things that you may want to consider in the future. I don't do a whole lot of designing, so I can't give too much in terms of constructive criticism. Sorry.

Posted: **August 9th, 2014, 11:30 pm**

"Beginner" is not equal to "Portal noob". I'm a beginner, too, and yet I put lots of work and effort into my levels.

Posted: **August 10th, 2014, 6:52 am**

Ok I think I should put some extra work into my levels

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