Marios Death/ You shouldn't of forgotten

[Thefiredragoon]

Marios Death
You shouldn't of forgotten mario... You shouldn't of forgotten...
Play Harry Potter And The Half-Blood Prince OST - Dumbledore's Farewell (Extended)

A level about mario wanting to kill himself for forgetting, And letting everyone in the mushroom kingdom die.

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[CedarBranch]

I approve of this, but, um... I didn't see this coming.

[Supershroom]

Seriously? Come on. Stuff like this doesn't make you popular at all. I've even completed this without using Hover FLUDD and getting burned.

[Thefiredragoon]

Seriously? Come on. Stuff like this doesn't make you popular at all. I've even completed this without using Hover FLUDD and getting burned.

I wasn't trying to get popular. I was just bored thinking of level ideas so i made this.

[Supershroom]

You shouldn't just make a stupid level for the only purpose of having made a level. Spend a day for one good level and not 12 crappy ones. (quoted from Brando)

[MessengerOfDreams]

What the knucklehead meant to say is, this level doesn't have all that much going for it. The design is extremely rudimentary, in such a way that makes it seem like barely any effort was put into it. The gameplay also matches, and is the most bare-bones level you could think of. I think patience is the key in designing; yeah, you can make more levels if you're quick but none of them are really going to be memorable. I'd recommend experimenting a bit and trying to put some time into these levels; it's harder, but more rewarding. You'll get more respect from others and more from yourself as well. Trust me; I started off rough but I've been able to harness my skills over time.

[Thefiredragoon]

-Sigh-
None of you get it do you. This is how this level came to be.

Me: I want to make a new level... But what will it be? *10-50 minutes later of thinking*
Me: How about the smallest level i can make, Only problem is the platforming and challenge has to be limited. I know! I'll make a story based level!
*Makes it*
Me: The platforming and challenge is extremely limited. I hope people are fine with that.
*When it gets posted*
Everyone: OH MY GOD YOUR A IDIOT GO DIE THIS LEVEL SUCKS
Me: I just wanted to make a extremely small level

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

The reason I approved this is because this didn't break any rules- it was short, yes, but it was completable, there was a hint of story and it wasn't utterly pointless. As I think I've said before, even if the level isn't any good you should always give criticism that's constructive in some way, so the designer doesn't make the same mistake twice and actually learns from it.

MoD did the right thing here, and firedragon try not to take it too personally. I know it came across as harsh but really we are just trying to help you improve and I hope you won't lose your confidence.

[Supershroom]

I want to apologize and tell you I didn't mean to hurt you, I didn't say you would be an idiot or something like this, generally nobody is an idiot just because of having released a bad level. If you want to see how to make very small levels that are still good and fun to play, check out the 25x25-squared LDC's (aka mini-LDC's) in the graveyard.