Boo's Ride

[the4kirby]

Boo's Ride
This is Boo's Ride. Topped with Boos, water down at the bottom, don't you worry. Clouds and platforms included.

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50x30~0*1323*52540*28*52540*28*52540*17*:q0*10*52540*28*52540*28*52540*25*~1,27,748,0,0,Right|34,84,773,1,0|73,77,763,Ride%20the%20steps%20and%20reach%20Big%20Boo%27s%20Floatin%27%20yard%20in%20the%20sky%21|82,138,744|18,275,765,32,0|19,451,764,16,0|18,668,771,8,0|19,864,773,4,0|18,1071,773,2,0|19,1268,766,1,0|20,1456,688|64,232,704,1|64,313,822,1|64,602,776,1|64,822,774,1|64,1166,771,1|64,1509,771,1|64,1305,586,1|114,1456,644,1,0|113,1456,601,1,0|8,1364,530,2,2,50,0,1|7,1261,516,3,0,113,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,1,1,120|34,953,538,1,0|38,-30,911,0,1800,400|101,913,506,1,0|101,993,506,1,0|77,955,502|33,784,547,1,0|33,679,546,1,0|31,592,496,1,0|31,528,464,1,0|31,464,432,1,0|31,400,400,1,0|31,336,368,1,0|31,272,336,1,0|31,208,304,1,0|31,144,272,1,0|31,80,240,1,0|31,16,208,1,0|32,80,144,1,0|32,144,112,1,0|32,208,80,1,0|32,280,48,1,0|7,377,46,3,0,500,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,3,1,999|6,1520,16|64,1218,62,1|64,690,14,1|64,167,155,1|64,514,368,1|64,1057,445,1|64,1192,263,1|65,1524,15,1|68,896,146,1|68,530,275,1|68,103,498,1|68,302,801,1|68,-82,839,1|68,833,835,1|68,1198,701,1|68,1441,487,0|68,1197,340,1|68,1280,159,1|72,1401,17,1|72,1458,17,0|114,1431,39,1,0|113,1431,-3,1,0~5~4~Boo%27s%20Ride

[CedarBranch]

In case something's brought up, I approve of this because I feel there was indeed some effort put in here for the level's size. However, I should note that the only tiling used (aside from the single Clock Cube) is cut off, but yet you did add a small variety of items, even if everything is a little too straight-forward.

My two pieces of advice: (1) If you're going to space things out, it would be a good idea to expand the level size. (2) Cutoff is something that should really be avoided. The amount found in this level is very small, but any noticeable cutoff is generally unwanted by players.