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Postby Thefiredragoon » August 14th, 2014, 11:55 am

Marios Journey 2-1: Aqua Temple
Disaster strikes, after Mario gets a job (Takes place after the events of 1-Boss) He has to find the Aqua Temple, Arriving at the ocean it was found at. He has realized that more sinister things then he thought were going on there!

Last Minute Note: The sign that says its a maze was something i forgot to change. That was my original plan for it though.

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A ton of stray levels coming up these few months.
Continuing The Mushroom Games
Super Mario Journey canceled (Atleast delayed for a year or 2. Maybe a few months?)
Marios Journey coming back as soon as i finish some Stray Levels. and finish The Mushroom Games
New series coming out when I'm back to doing 1 series (When I'm continuing Super Mario Journey)
Doing Polls on boss levels/Series Beginners saying whether or not you would like to see more of it.

(IMPORTANT NOTICE: i will not be posting levels that much while school starts. I will try to make levels but it will possibly take a day or 2 just to get time to start one)
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Re: Marios Journey 2-1: Aqua Temple

Postby Supershroom » August 14th, 2014, 12:06 pm

You're having a topic in the Level Series forum where you put all your series levels in, so I suggest you not to put all of them into the portal to save topics, it's enough if you just post the first level and maybe the boss level of each word into the portal and give a link to the other levels within your level series topic. People still can comment on them. This level has no cutoff, that's good, but I still find the graphics are very conventional. Great designers have become great because of also showing graphical effects that look unconventional, but even more pretty and interesting (meaning this excludes any kind of cutoff). You obviously know that no air health is lost with a metal star; to make the "maze" a challenge, you should remove it and scatter some coins around, but not too much, so the player isn't able to run into blind alleys too often without drowning.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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Re: Marios Journey 2-1: Aqua Temple

Postby Thefiredragoon » August 14th, 2014, 12:14 pm

Supershroom wrote:You're having a topic in the Level Series forum where you put all your series levels in, so I suggest you not to put all of them into the portal to save topics, it's enough if you just post the first level and maybe the boss level of each word into the portal and give a link to the other levels within your level series topic. People still can comment on them. This level has no cutoff, that's good, but I still find the graphics are very conventional. Great designers have become great because of also showing graphical effects that look unconventional, but even more pretty and interesting (meaning this excludes any kind of cutoff). You obviously know that no air health is lost with a metal star; to make the "maze" a challenge, you should remove it and scatter some coins around, but not too much, so the player isn't able to run into blind alleys too often without drowning.


I forgot to change the sign, Its not actually a maze
Schedule:

A ton of stray levels coming up these few months.
Continuing The Mushroom Games
Super Mario Journey canceled (Atleast delayed for a year or 2. Maybe a few months?)
Marios Journey coming back as soon as i finish some Stray Levels. and finish The Mushroom Games
New series coming out when I'm back to doing 1 series (When I'm continuing Super Mario Journey)
Doing Polls on boss levels/Series Beginners saying whether or not you would like to see more of it.

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Re: Marios Journey 2-1: Aqua Temple

Postby Asterocrat » August 14th, 2014, 1:40 pm

Supershroom wrote:You're having a topic in the Level Series forum where you put all your series levels in, so I suggest you not to put all of them into the portal to save topics, it's enough if you just post the first level and maybe the boss level of each word into the portal and give a link to the other levels within your level series topic.

what

No but seriously, there is nowhere this is even true. People are allowed to post their levels even if they're part of a large series like it is the case here. There is no limit to the number of posted levels one can have on the portal... Where did you even read that was a thing
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Re: Marios Journey 2-1: Aqua Temple

Postby Supershroom » August 14th, 2014, 11:28 pm

It was just a suggestion and no order, at least this is what I would do if I made a large level series.
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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