future dream

[ovidiu2007]

future dream
first mp6,now mp5!!

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[CedarBranch]

I honestly could not give enough good reasons to disapprove this, but I should let you [this user] know that cutoff is a bad thing to have in any levels (unless you cover it up somehow). I also suggest spending a bit more time on your levels, if you want them to generally be better.

Also, I've noticed that some of your levels have been a bit too confusing. As some advice, try playtesting your levels as if you didn't create them, and then look for what may be a little too confusing; something that maybe only the designer of the level would understand. It may take some practice to pull that off, but it'll surely be worth the experience, as you'll eventually learn to make cleaner and smoother levels that most other players would be able to understand and follow through.