Mario's Clone

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Mario's Clone

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Postby Jumbo101 » August 24th, 2014, 9:31 am

Mario's Clone

My very first level on here! I made a TON of more of levels like
this, but there saved on a file so, yeah... Anyways... Enjoy!

~ Story ~

When Bowser kidnaps Mario, he clones him into an evil version of him.
He commands the clone to help him destroy the world. Unfortunately, the
clone refuses to do such treacherous evil deeds for him and throws him in
a prison cell. He needs to decide if he wants to help Bowser, or die. He has
24 hours to think about it. But he can't up his mind, so he has a plan: Try to
escape and save the real Mario. Find out what happens next by playing this!

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Re: Mario's Clone

Postby Supershroom » August 24th, 2014, 11:59 am

You have talent :) though this isn't overwhelming, especially you should try to make your graphics more appealing. The airship doesn't be fully covered with cabin bricks, there are many other bricks to create an interestingly-looking airship. However I must state I'm impressed by the start position trick, that's something I've never seen before in more than one year of playing SM63, and it shows you have experience on LDing.

You've got the requirement to become a great designer, keep it up. :)
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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Re: Mario's Clone = AMAZING!!

Postby Jeremy X » August 24th, 2014, 11:01 pm

All your levels!! There Amazing! What Supershroom said. Because you have an amazing imagination! Keep it up! (The Unforgiving prison was amazing too)
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