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test

PostPosted: November 17th, 2014, 2:30 pm
by metalmario8
test
can you survive this test to prove your the best dodger in super Mario 63

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Re: test

PostPosted: November 17th, 2014, 3:34 pm
by l.m
Fine. Time to ruin some lives:

(-) "Test". A small, useless name. I can't find the creativity. When I saw this name, I could see things would get worse.
(-) You know what, the graphics of your level are a pain in the eye. Boring green brick tiles, no use of something different, items are placed incorrectly, and the flames/thwomps/bullet bills' properties are untouched, getting everything worse. You should thank God that there's no way of having cutoff in this case, else I wouldn't even play your level.
(-) "obsticals" sounds funny; eheheh
(-) Massive use of bullies in the beginning. They don't let me read the sign, so I had to restart the level to at least have a chance.
(+) [ALMOST] no lag. The framerate drop down a little bit when you get to the enemies, but nothing too much important.
(-) Enemies, enemies, enemies. A bunch of goombas, koopas, shy-guys, thwomps, bullet bills, bullies, boos, bob-ombs *loses breath* Ugh. Those bunch of useless enemies let the level a little bit, you know, frustrating. Please try to reduce the amount of them in your next levels.
(-) Cheap platforming. Jumping over flames and defeating enemies aren't very original.
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please take this as a joke


I'll be giving you only 1 star. Please, improve the quality of your levels and try to do better next time.

Re: test

PostPosted: November 17th, 2014, 8:05 pm
by Rex_Lestra
Judging by the spelling I'd say the level's designer is about 5-8 years old

Re: test

PostPosted: November 18th, 2014, 12:38 am
by Supershroom
If I wanna read the sign at the beginning, just ground-pound the bullies. I also don't think that the graphics are terrible, except from a few slight mistakes like airborne flames and uncovered warp pipe bases.

Enemy spam is annoying, of course, but in this case it doesn't lag, so it's just half as bad. Nonetheless the amount of bullet bills was bothersome. The arrangement of thwomps (yes, they are thwomps and not whomps) and flames at the beginning isn't also the greatest. Thankfully there are enough blue coins.

I rate 2 stars.