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Volcanic Simplicity

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Postby Coinshower » December 14th, 2014, 8:11 am

This level is a sequel to Glacial Simplicity, but now, it's the temperature of an oven!

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Re: Volcanic Simplicity

Postby Supershroom » December 15th, 2014, 12:16 am

Two major flaws:

The level is unnecessarily tall and the background messes up, showing its black border.
The second transition is very narrow so the camera extremely shakes as soon as I enter it.

I'm sure this is both not intentional, so test your levels.

The level itself is very simplistic and quite short. Please put more effort into your levels. Rated 2 stars.
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Re: Volcanic Simplicity

Postby Coinshower » December 15th, 2014, 8:25 am

The second was intentional. I wanted it to look like the volcano was erupting/ an earthquake.
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Re: Volcanic Simplicity

Postby -BY » December 15th, 2014, 12:34 pm

Coinshower wrote:The second was intentional. I wanted it to look like the volcano was erupting/ an earthquake.
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You may also call this constructive criticism. The things he told you about, were more than legit to say.
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Re: Volcanic Simplicity

Postby Coinshower » December 24th, 2014, 8:18 am

I may also call this being insulted.
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Re: Volcanic Simplicity

Postby Raz » December 24th, 2014, 11:24 pm

I wouldn't call it constructive criticism. He didn't list any positives in the level, and it wasn't in a very friendly manner. Instead of telling him how to improve, he only told him the negatives. Listing flaws is okay as long as you tell them how to improve.
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