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I'm sorry that this was so short, but I was desperate to get to the next part and I can't change backgrounds just like that. So here's the prologue.

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I like how you start the story and i am waiting for the next part i hope you will make it interesting and fun.

Well, I can't say much. This is too much short, even for a prologue. Tiles are used in a very mediocre way; no cuttoff, right, but not impressive graphics either. The story feel bland and short. I can't understand. No platforming, no coins, no enemies, so only the flames and the abyss can kill you.

Sorry, but this deserves 1/5.