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Secret Of The Hills

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Postby LuigiTheBowser » January 17th, 2015, 8:40 am

Secret Of The Hills
This night, at 11:00 P.M., Toad told Mario about a Shine Sprite at Mushroom Hills. And Toad knows how Mario needs to get then straight away, even if at midnight. :troll: Here's the code!: :awe:

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Re: Secret Of The Hills

Postby Supershroom » January 17th, 2015, 12:35 pm

This is a small but fairly enjoyable level. Good and diversed platforming and good use of décor. However:

1) At the very start there's cutoff, aka ground tiles with no finished top or sides. Use top and ceiling tiles instead of blank ground tiles. If this can't be done properly (yes, the designer has its restrictions), you can try to use tiles with no unfinished edges, such as green bricks or lava minicubes.
2) Hidden pipes are used here and there, but hidden doors are used very rarily. I've needed to reset the level because I was searching for a pipe all the time. You should at least say that it's a door being hidden.
3) There's some lag mostly due to bob-ombs and falling enemies.

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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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Re: Secret Of The Hills

Postby LuigiTheBowser » January 18th, 2015, 10:53 am

Ok! Ill try my best to get it to be easier and a bit faster next time! And better textures! :D
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