bowser's master plan part 2

[supergamer250]

bowser's master plan part 2
can you reach the top of this galactic mess?

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[l.m]

Well, from what I've played, I would really call it a "galactic mess". But let us go by steps:

- First of all, you should work more in the graphics of your level. Really. I understand why you put all the platforms and items in the air because it's supposed to be a galaxy, but it's really boring, and make the level look boring and ugly. It doesn't look like a galacting mess.

- Some items are placed poorly. In the pipe part, you used the wrong items to try to make some kind of pipe connection while at the same time creating cutoff and letting the graphics even more bad. Also, you could use good grammar in your sigs, to give a professional aspect to your level.

- Also, I couldn't really understand much of the storyline. Like, Bowser build a super galactic empire and some kind of thing called "Proxi" helps you to reach the top because you must get the shine sprite... Really confusing story.

- As for the platforming, it was cheap and boring. I didn't had much fun, except in the water part, where it was somewhat fun, but I wouldn't call it "great", in the Fun aspect. Also, the door puzzle was simply HORRIBLE. Please, don't do stuff like this.

With all these things on mind, I give you 2 stars. I know it's your first level, but take this criticism serioulsy and try to improve. I don't want all the time I used to write this to be vain.