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Mario & Luigi The Meteor Ep 1

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Postby sonicspace123 » February 13th, 2015, 8:44 am

Mario & Luigi The Meteor Ep 1
Mario And Luigi Wakes Up At A Disaster,While they are spending time in their house they heard a Huge Boom!.Next part will be on Soon.

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Re: Mario & Luigi The Meteor Ep 1

Postby TheExcavator » February 13th, 2015, 8:45 pm

I have rated your level a 1/5 for the following reasons:

Use of various wall and background tiles: You use a decent variety of castle tiles but you could certainly improve in this department. And especially with when to use what tiles, which I'll cover in...

Items showing that are not intended to be shown: Unfortunately/Fortunately red carpet tiles show what items you try to hide behind them. So all the shine sprites you used to give a glow-feel and the flame towers under the oven are all completely visible.

The oven: When I saw this I lol'd. Thanks for that man.

Length and Difficulty: Your level is very much too short and very much too easy. Try to make a level that plays out for longer and actually present challenges to the player or else the level is kinda boring without that risk of failing.

You can definitely improve the quality of your levels and I hope you do. While I did rate this level a 1/5, I did so not to be mean but to show you that you can make better stuff than this. Have a good day sir.
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Re: Mario & Luigi The Meteor Ep 1

Postby sonicspace123 » February 14th, 2015, 9:48 pm

superm63creator wrote:I have rated your level a 1/5 for the following reasons:

Use of various wall and background tiles: You use a decent variety of castle tiles but you could certainly improve in this department. And especially with when to use what tiles, which I'll cover in...

Items showing that are not intended to be shown: Unfortunately/Fortunately red carpet tiles show what items you try to hide behind them. So all the shine sprites you used to give a glow-feel and the flame towers under the oven are all completely visible.

The oven: When I saw this I lol'd. Thanks for that man.

Length and Difficulty: Your level is very much too short and very much too easy. Try to make a level that plays out for longer and actually present challenges to the player or else the level is kinda boring without that risk of failing.

You can definitely improve the quality of your levels and I hope you do. While I did rate this level a 1/5, I did so not to be mean but to show you that you can make better stuff than this. Have a good day sir.

Thanks For the info I will sure to improve
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