The Glacial Volcano

[LuigiTheBowser]

The Glacial Volcano
What's this? Some other Volcano level? I think not! It may be hard in some places, but it IS possible. Just make sure you have everything before getting the Shine. Sorry if it's slow, or hard to get through, but IT IS POSSIBLE. It makes you have the code, but here:

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[LuigiTheBowser]

Just want to say, it would be nice to have some criticism replies, just help help make my levels better.

[l.m]

Well, let me give you some advice then. I'll put the good things in green and the bad things in red.

The first thing I saw in the level was the boring use of the volcano tiles. It was just some plains with volcano tiles and a triangle representing the volcano. Inside the volcano, just some blocks of ice placed randomly around the volcano area. Your level really lacks decoration, you should try to add rocks/trees/any stuff to make your level look better, and more tile combinations, so it doesn't look boring at all.

The lag inside the volcano was a little bit annoying, even because I had to platform around to get the Red Coins, and the FPS was a bit low. You could add some level transitions or remove the excess of enemies, but it wasn't something too important. But, talking about Red Coins...

...you didn't say how many coins I had to collect to trigger the Shine Sprite. If you don't do this, the player will stay a bit confused.

In terms of platforming, I rather say that even if the platforming was a bit cheap, I had fun collecting the Red Coins and knocking the bullies out of the platforms. Just an advice, though: You should add more coins and more differentiated enemies, so my experience with the level will be better.

This is a regular level. Not so bad, but you really could improve it more and give a better experience to the player. So, my score for this is 2 stars.

[LuigiTheBowser]

Ok! I'll keep that in mind later!