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Mushroom Jungle Hills

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Postby manhattenjack » February 14th, 2015, 12:23 pm

Here Is My First Level :) Hope you will like it
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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby ~Yuri » February 14th, 2015, 12:44 pm

Moved your level to the Super Mario 63 level portal. Next time you want to post a level, post them here.

Really nice first level by the way, looking forward seeing more from you!
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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby Supershroom » February 14th, 2015, 12:51 pm

Looks good and has good gameplay. Could be longer, but for being at the default size, it's nice. Good debut.
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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby manhattenjack » February 14th, 2015, 12:52 pm

Yurimaster wrote:Moved your level to the Super Mario 63 level portal. Next time you want to post a level, post them here.

Really nice first level by the way, looking forward seeing more from you!


Thanks, Ive Just Made Another By The Time Ive seen your message ... BTW tnx again ;)
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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby l.m » February 14th, 2015, 1:11 pm

Heh, the level looks nice. You used a fair amount of decoration, so it doesn't look ugly and empty but not too exaggerated either. I liked how you put the Red Coins and the Sling Stars, and the platforming was easy, but still enjoyable. The only real bad part of it is the length, because the level ended really quick.

Amazing for your first level. I rate it 4 stars.
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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby manhattenjack » February 14th, 2015, 1:30 pm

FrozenFire wrote:Heh, the level looks nice. You used a fair amount of decoration, so it doesn't look ugly and empty but not too exaggerated either. I liked how you put the Red Coins and the Sling Stars, and the platforming was easy, but still enjoyable. The only real bad part of it is the length, because the level ended really quick.

Amazing for your first level. I rate it 4 stars.


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Re: Mushroom Jungle Hills

Postby MessengerOfDreams » February 15th, 2015, 4:09 pm

It's not perfect- there's some streamlining you could do to make sure it flows better, through all four levels- but for someone who's a beginner it's better than it has any right to be. Great start, keep learning and adapting, and I hope to see great things from you.
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