Secret Of The Sands

[manhattenjack]

Sorry i was confused where to put this >.< but still heres the level not as good as my last.

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enjoy

[l.m]

Hmm, this was quite a lot short. Platforming was OK, and I don't have anything to complain about the graphics (except the items were slightly misplaced above the ground, but nothing too much noticeable), but the real problem here is the length. I had a good experience, but it suddenly ended quickly. You should try to make longer levels, and add more platforming, so it will be a great experience. Also, you don't have to use a bunch of arrows pointing to the same place, because the player should know what to do.

I rate it 3 stars. Try to make longer levels and spend more time doing it, and you should be fine