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Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 5:54 am
by asdfmoviecaleb
Journey 1
*SPOILER ALERT* That stinger could of been a level of its own.

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Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 12:07 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
Wo2, this is the first time nobody has noticed my level. This was such a good level though... :|

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 12:18 pm
by Supershroom
Not every level gets a reply the first day after being posted. Patience is key.

If you want someone to give critique, just say "please comment and rate" or such, or PM somebody you'd like a review from. If it's not a joke or spam level, you won't bother people with this, instead they're pleased to share their experience.

I'm a bit busy right now, there has been a lot of new levels the last days ...

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 12:50 pm
by ~Yuri
It's a decent level. There's one problem though: when you use that sling star to get into the ship, the cage tiles won't allow you to get inside it. I suggest removing these cage tiles and adding something else. 3 stars for now due to this glitch.

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 5:48 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
Yurimaster wrote:It's a decent level. There's one problem though: when you use that sling star to get into the ship, the cage tiles won't allow you to get inside it. I suggest removing these cage tiles and adding something else. 3 stars for now due to this glitch.
This is because after you got out of the sling star, you continued to spin. This slowed you down, so you couldn't get passed the cage.

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 5:48 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
Supershroom wrote:Not every level gets a reply the first day after being posted. Patience is key.

If you want someone to give critique, just say "please comment and rate" or such, or PM somebody you'd like a review from. If it's not a joke or spam level, you won't bother people with this, instead they're pleased to share their experience.

I'm a bit busy right now, there has been a lot of new levels the last days ...
It was a joke, btw. :lol:

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 7:14 pm
by MessengerOfDreams
You've got big aspirations, which I like, but there's still some lackluster building design you should work on, as well as making the gameplay tighter and a little more variant. This is just to get on the way to becoming a legit pro, which you certainly have the capabilities to be given time. 4/5

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 18th, 2015, 8:28 pm
by ~Yuri
asdfmoviecaleb wrote:
Yurimaster wrote:It's a decent level. There's one problem though: when you use that sling star to get into the ship, the cage tiles won't allow you to get inside it. I suggest removing these cage tiles and adding something else. 3 stars for now due to this glitch.
This is because after you got out of the sling star, you continued to spin. This slowed you down, so you couldn't get passed the cage.



Whoops. So much time playing SM63 and I completely forgot about this glitch. :P

So, as I said, your level is pretty decent. I really hope to see more levels for you. 4 stars ^_^

Re: Journey 1

PostPosted: February 20th, 2015, 6:41 am
by asdfmoviecaleb
MessengerOfDreams wrote:You've got big aspirations, which I like, but there's still some lackluster building design you should work on, as well as making the gameplay tighter and a little more variant. This is just to get on the way to becoming a legit pro, which you certainly have the capabilities to be given time. 4/5
Aw... Shucks... :)