Adventure Forward 1-1

[SuperPika999]

Adventure Forward 1-1
My First Level. Hope you enjoy! Please give me tips to make better levels!

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[l.m]

Let me give you some criticism.

I'd like to tell you about cutoff. In the end of the second part, there was an incomplete edge (you didn't put any Wall or Corner tiles, so it seems like the edge was unfinished). You must add the Wall tiles to the edge so it looks complete, but it's not something too important.

The level overall is very easy and small. You could have added some more platforming, and increased the level length a little bit so it gets more long and challenging, and more fun. You used a fair amount of enemies, that's OK, but next time don't put them next to level transitions, otherwise they will hurt you as soon as you enter the second part, and it will stay annoying.

As for the graphics and the decoration, it was average, but nothing too much beautiful either. Also, some items were placed over the ground, making it look like they were floating. You just have to drag them to the floor (If you want a tip to place items better, select CTRL in your keyboard while placing any item, so it will stay more organized )

Overall, it was something short, easy, but acceptable for your first level. I'll give you 3 stars. Don't take this as a bad thing though, you just need to use what I said and do better.

[SuperPika999]

Let me give you some criticism.

I'd like to tell you about cutoff. In the end of the second part, there was an incomplete edge (you didn't put any Wall or Corner tiles, so it seems like the edge was unfinished). You must add the Wall tiles to the edge so it looks complete, but it's not something too important.

The level overall is very easy and small. You could have added some more platforming, and increased the level length a little bit so it gets more long and challenging, and more fun. You used a fair amount of enemies, that's OK, but next time don't put them next to level transitions, otherwise they will hurt you as soon as you enter the second part, and it will stay annoying.

As for the graphics and the decoration, it was average, but nothing too much beautiful either. Also, some items were placed over the ground, making it look like they were floating. You just have to drag them to the floor (If you want a tip to place items better, select CTRL in your keyboard while placing any item, so it will stay more organized )

Overall, it was something short, easy, but acceptable for your first level. I'll give you 3 stars. Don't take this as a bad thing though, you just need to use what I said and do better.

Ok, Thanks. I will try to make a level that's better and longer.