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Postby ovidiu2007 » February 26th, 2015, 6:25 am

gem cave
gems???

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Re: gem cave

Postby ChaosYoshi » February 26th, 2015, 12:05 pm

This is actually a kinda neat effect. I'm not sure if it's been used before, but for my money it's still pretty interesting.
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Re: gem cave

Postby lordpat » February 27th, 2015, 6:09 am

Hello! I am lordpat, and I have played some of your levels and thought about dropping a review.

I actually like this level! The graphics were pretty nice looking, and it has some originality into it! The decor is nicely placed, and the tiling, while not super original, fits well. The problem sort of lies in the gameplay department. My main complaint is that if you fail a jump you get sort of trapped, and there is no pipe to take you to the beginning. I would recommend you either that or simply making a botmless pit. A second problem is that the level is sort of boring gameplay-wise, as it is mostly just simple jumps. I would recommend adding green platforms (I personally like circle platforms and triangles) and such. Thirdly, I think some enemies would help the level build a more confortable atmosphere, as it feels sort of empty. Finally, (and this is a problem that appears in many of your levels) the level is a bit too short. I think extending the level would help the experience a lot, as before you get time to enjoy the level it ends.

But still, I want to make clear I liked the level, I think the graphics were pretty good. And I am really hoping to see more from you!

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