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Posted: **February 26th, 2015, 10:57 am**

Deserted Beach Island
I know I said deserted, but thats no fun (^v^)

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Posted: **February 26th, 2015, 12:19 pm**

This level isn't bad, but it's not all that good either. For one, there's not much visual flair in your level. Sure, you did use plenty of props, and it's rather hard to make tile sets like the desert look nice, but other aspects like the water background tiles and the cave tiles seem to come out of nowhere. There's practically no need for them, let alone the huge contrast between those tiles and the rest of your environment (especially with the cave tiles in this case).

Posted: **February 27th, 2015, 11:18 pm**

It's cool,but is no background. Because was cool,I given you 4 stars (don't say I'm bad,I'm the ONLY who has given you stars).

Posted: **February 28th, 2015, 1:54 am**

Who says that every levels needs a background? There are many great levels with a black background, and I think it fits here.

Yeah caleb, that's a neat level. Great decorations, good structures, and also a nice scavenger hunt (however, it's not nice to get hit by the enemies on the cloud after using the sling star, try to avoid forced damages). About mixing cave and grass, yes, you should try to have some bricks in-between, e.g. green bricks or lava minicubes, those are almost always good to separate different types of grounds. Whereas, the jungle tiles above the grass tiles looked really good.

Also, it could still be a little bit longer. You already have good graphics, now you should also try to make your levels fun.

3.5 --> 4 stars from me. You're also welcome to enter the 29th LDC by the way, it has a very nice theme (grasslands)

Posted: **March 1st, 2015, 10:22 am**

Good game! I enjoyed it! :awe:

4/5

Posted: **March 2nd, 2015, 10:46 am**

Supershroom wrote: You're also welcome to enter the 29th LDC by the way, it has a very nice theme (grasslands)

How do you do that? I think that would be fun! :awe:

Posted: **March 2nd, 2015, 11:07 am**

asdfmoviecaleb wrote:
Supershroom wrote: You're also welcome to enter the 29th LDC by the way, it has a very nice theme (grasslands)
How do you do that? I think that would be fun!

You just have to post here, saying you want to enter, and then, make a level with the specified theme (this time the theme is Grasslands), follow the rules on the topic and when you finish your level, post your level in the Vault, right here! Then, you must wait for the deadline end, and then the Judges will judge your level and give you a score!

You can win shiny medals if you get a high score! If you want to know more, then read the topic and it's rules.

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