the cave

[ovidiu2007]

the cave

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[lordpat]

Hello! It's me again, and I thought about dropping another review.

I like this level too, but it comes with its flaws. I liked the beginning of the level, it was varied, I liked the brown spinning platforms the most, as it was challenging. Another highlight of the level is the tiling, it is creative and original I like it, but at difference of gem cave, there was no decor. I am personally a huge fan of decor, so I would think some plant caves would help create atmosphere. The level has two main problems, both of which were present on the gem cave level, the first one being that the level lacked platforming, most of it was just jumping from one cave construction to the next, I would like more platforms like there were in the first part. The second problem it its lenght, it is a bit longer that the gem cave level, but still, I would like it a bit more if it was longer, as the level ends before you can start to enjoy it.

There were some improovements shown in this level, specially in the first part, but sadly the rest of the level was not as good. I still enjoyed it and I am really lookfoward to your next level!

With care,
~lordpat

[CedarBranch]

I'm in agreement with lordpat. I'd listen to him.

I really don't think this level is all that bad. Sure there're no decorations at all, but at least there's some challenge early on, as lordpat has said, though it's a bit minimal. The beginning of the level shows effort, but I recommend you try going a little further out there; not only would I suggest that you focus on being consistent with decorations, I would also like to see some slightly more-advanced series of platforming. It can get rather boring when there isn't much to be curious about. Try experimenting with items and enemies!

I can tell that you tried to learn from your previous level, and I appreciate that! Everybody learns at their own pace, so keep it up!

I'd give this 2.25 Stars out of five, but I don't want to be a jerk, so I'll round it up to 3 Stars. :3