Broken Castle

[Mr Pop]

Broken Castle
It's my first level. Very short. Try to find all 5 silver stars!

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[l.m]

Glad to see this is your first level. It's always good to see new users in the LDing scene. Now, let me give you a short review:

First of all, let's talk about the platforming. I liked how you placed the Brick tiles along the space, and it was fun to platform and jump over the bricks, but it was still a little bit cheap. I liked a lot how you placed the Sling Stars and how they launched you in the exact place. Great use of Sling Stars, but I was bothered with the fact that you didn't use any coins or enemies, so the platforming was a bit easy. You could have added some enemies to give a better experience. Also, a Super Mario 63 level without coins doesn't look like a Super Mario 63 level. Be sure to put some coins in some places.

As for the graphics, the fact that there was a lot of Bricks randomly placed around the level area bothered me. You could have worked a little bit more in this area, and instead of placing random Brick Tiles, maybe using solid structures and putting different tiles to give the level a more colorful look, because I couldn't see any color other than grey.

With all these things on mind, I'll give you 2 stars. Not bad, but awesome for your first level. Keep improving and you'll be there

[Mr Pop]

Thanks!