frosted lake

[ovidiu2007]

frosted lake

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[lordpat]

Hey, ovidu, it's me again, dropping yet another review. Anyway, let' get into it!

So, again, I like the level, but I think some elements need improoving. The graphics are great, you even use disabling! That is awesome! I like the idea of the forzen lake, and the graphics help it work. The problem is, sadly, in the gameplay.
For starters, I would like to see some enemies, as it would help it make less empty. Another problem is the lack of platforming, for the most part, it is just going in a straight line, I think making some pits and puting some platforms would help it out. Finally, the level is too short, I would like the level to be longer, as that would give you more space to explore the platofrming.

As I said I liked the level, I am really looking foward to what you have to offer next! I think you are improoving, but your gameplay is still the point that needs the most work. I give it three stars overall.

With care,
~lordpat