by l.m » March 10th, 2015, 7:38 am
Okay. Time to give you a review. PLEASE, pay attention to it, so you don't make the same mistakes. I'll try to make it clear of you.
- The level is WAY too small. Really, it was very fast, and easy, I took less than 30 seconds to finish it. Please make longer levels, because this is too small.
- No coins. No enemies. No decoration. Nothing beautiful. You should spend more time with your level. Where are the coins? And enemies? It felt very bland and boring. Next time add enemies and coins, and maybe some decoration.
- I was having a hard time trying to figure out the normal blocks and the breakable blocks. It was the only real challenge there, but it was still a bit annoying.
- The structure of the level was ugly. You just placed some Blue Brick tiles, breakable tiles, a sign, a Power-Up Star, a Shine Sprite and done. Please, spend more time trying to do something good.
I don't have much to say. No cutoff, no lag, but it was ugly, small and easy. 1 star.
Now that's the part I say to you. PLEASE, spend more time, and use what I said here to make levels that are longer, better and more challenging. Because it seems you're not paying attention to anything at all, and this is horrible, and turns you into a bad designer.
I still believe you can improve. The only thing you really need is: Spend more time.
