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Hello, Yoshi Chronicles! It seems this is your first level. Let me say what I think about it:

The platforming of your level is fairly OK. Nothing too much challenging and some good amount of coins to collect. Good. I liked how you placed the clock platforms into a circle. The Silver Stars were fun to collect, and there's a good amount of enemies. The only thing I found out that was very bad is that the level is way too small. You should try to make bigger levels, so I can enjoy the experience even more. It seems that there's not much elements in the graphical aspect, so I don't have much to say.

With all these things on mind, I was going to rate your level two stars, but since this is your first level and you need to improve, I'll give you 3 stars. I hope you make even better levels, and use what I said to improve.