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Postby YoshiChronicles » March 15th, 2015, 7:57 am

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Re: Royal Garden

Postby Asterocrat » March 15th, 2015, 8:06 am

Hey there! I just approved your level, and I have to say, I am really impressed! For a second level, this already looks pretty great! I really liked the beginning and the slight luck factor, the level was fun to go through and graphics were really good-looking. You're off to a great start, you could go very far.

Hey, did you know we have a Level Designing Contest going on? I'm sure you could give it a try :P viewtopic.php?f=15&t=47831

StarEDIT: btw, rated 5 stars. Good looking, fun to play, good job for a second level
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby Supershroom » March 15th, 2015, 8:09 am

Agreeing on this. A bit short and tiny, but really nice tiling, great decorations, just as an awesome level needs to have. You're very welcome for the LDC, there's enough time left.
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby YoshiChronicles » March 15th, 2015, 8:15 am

Hey thanks! I made this level 4 years ago, and I didn't post this until I got an account. Anyways, thanks for your opinion! I looked at the contest and the theme is grassland. Do you think I should enter this level in the contest? :|
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby Asterocrat » March 15th, 2015, 8:19 am

Well, the problem is you can't enter a level you made before the contest. You would have to make a new level. But hey, nothing stops you from using this level as a base, maybe make it longer and improving it to enter the contest.
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby l.m » March 15th, 2015, 8:23 am

Wow, that's actually very impressive. I don't think it deserves less than 5 stars. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 15th, 2015, 1:18 pm

I thought it was good before, but knowing it was a 2011 level now makes it even more impressive.
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Re: Royal Garden

Postby Supershroom » March 16th, 2015, 1:59 am

A few stuff may I add:

The transitions are rather narrow, too narrow in fact, so once I zoom out at the beginning, the camera shows cutoff to the left. Just expand the transitions or the borders a bit and this isn't a problem.

Second, pay attention to how you use switch tiles, because it's actually not good to see a cannon tile floating alone in the sky, with the switch being unactivated. Just put a bit of grass around the cannon and that's fine.

4 stars from me, I've enjoyed this. About the LDC, we're pleased of course if you join, the theme is really easy to make nice levels for and it's also a good experience for you to learn how to improve further by the judges' reviews.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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