Red-coins in the castle grounds

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Postby John » March 23rd, 2015, 5:19 am

Red-coins in the castle grounds
You should collect all my red-coinsto get an

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I'll give each level an unoffical overview with 100 points in total.



1.Level Quality: (25/100 points): Include level diffculty, graphics and the designing of the level. If a level is so hard or laggy that I can't pass this star will immediately be lost. And if a level is so easy that I can EASILY pass it, I'll cost scores according to the circumstances.
How to judge if a level is laggy:

FPS: 26+: Good.

FPS: 20-26: Not very good, but it can be accepted.

FPS: 14-20: Bad.
FPS: 14-: Terrible, I can't stand!

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2.In-game playing: (45/100 points): Include level decoration, the use of tiles. And if this level is interesting, fascinating and chellenging, etc.



3.Other (30/100 points): Mistakes, bugs and warm tips. If there is any bugs that can't let me pass the level, I'll reduce a lot of points..



Final rating:
0-29 = 1 star
25-59 = 2 stars

60-74 = 3 stars
75-84 = 4 stars
85-100 = 5 stars



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Re: Red-coins in the castle grounds

Postby Supershroom » March 23rd, 2015, 8:09 am

I'm already gonna tell you to pay more attention to tiling - if you cover the two middle rows of a transition, they're still transparent, you have to cover the rows directly neighboured to the transition strip. Also, you should close the inner castle areas (you can jump outside of them), and I've also seen a few cutoff instances. The thing with the transition and the unclosed inner areas is especially annoying as there's sometimes open death at the other side. Also, why make the inside hall so big?

Sorry for rating one star, but this level is very untested and inherently flawed. You have good gameplay-wise and graphical rudiments, but now you should pay attention to let your level work out finely.
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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Re: Red-coins in the castle grounds

Postby l.m » March 23rd, 2015, 8:25 am

I think 1 star is a bit too less for this level. I would give it if it had no effort, boring platforming, and such, and this is not the case. Also, since like this is your first level, I'm going to give it 2 stars. Just remember to remove the cutoff and the excess of items next time.
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