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Postby blazeron1 » March 24th, 2015, 5:42 pm

sun quest 1-2
obtain the orb from the sun temple

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Re: sun quest 1-2

Postby Awesomeguy 99 » March 24th, 2015, 6:23 pm

OK, here's some immediate problems I have:
-The level is all in one spot. You could have made the level less laggy by placing a transition and the small levels on the other side.
-The Hover FLUDD breaks the entire thing, no effort required.
-Lack of enemies besides Bullies is a really redundant.
-Though better than the last one, this was still REALLY short.
-There's still barely any decoration.
-WAY. TOO. MANY. SHINE. SPRITES. It was really, REALLY unnecessary. It made the game go under 2 FPS.THIS IS NOT NEEDED.
Even though this is better than the last level, I rate 1 Star, because we told you some things to fix, and barely fixed any of the problems.
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Re: sun quest 1-2

Postby Supershroom » March 25th, 2015, 1:20 am

The mass of shine sprites (84 in total) is a characteristic of these levels (those shall form powerful Sun Orbs), but yes, this level is really poor and lacks effort. Very few gameplay, very sparse graphics (except from the Shine room maybe). Blazeron, I really hope you read this and improve your levels, as this is already the third time or so you want to restart this series.
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