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Bowser's Air Fleet
An air fleet is coming strait at the kingdom! Grab the 5 stars on the ships, and then get the shine sprite to deactivate the ship's anti-gravity tech, causing them to crash, hurry! there's not much time! (rate what you feel, and give me some tips! I'm always looking to improve!) play the purple coin version! -> http://runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=80&t=48348

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That's a very regular level actually, even though somewhat small. I like the airships and the concept in general, where you had to jump from a ship to another, but the platforming is somewhat cheap, and easy. Almost 100% of it is just jumping over bullies. Please try to add more platforms and gimmicks to improve the platforming even more, but I still must agree, it was nice.

As for the graphics, it wasn't professional at all. You used the same kind of tile for all the airships, and it looked kind of boring, but acceptable. Try to avoid placing of the same tile.

Overall, good amount of enemies and coins, fairly OK platforming, and not-so-good graphics. I'll give you 2 stars.

You can use what I said here to create even better levels, and who knows, get 5 stars. Just keep on.

I loved every second of it ))