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The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 11:43 am
by asdfmoviecaleb
The Intro-SMG63
An old, completely unoriginal series by me.
Now, lets talk serious.
I know that there are already 1, or 2, or 231 SMG series here, and I want to take a shot.
I will try to add as many SMG mechanics as I can.
PLEASE RATE 5 IF YOU WANT ME TO MAKE MORE!!! :D


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Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 12:42 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
Will someone please notice my levels they have been completely ignored lately. :?

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 12:52 pm
by l.m
asdfmoviecaleb wrote:Will someone please notice my levels they have been completely ignored lately. :?


Well, you should be a little bit more patient. There should be at least one rating your level, being it late or not. ;)

But okay, here we go.

The level was kind of small and easy, to say the truth, but I liked the amount of enemies and the falling Bullet Bills, they gave an extra challenge to the level. But I don't have much to talk about it, only that it was pretty small, and easy, despite the amount of enemies.

The graphics were actually OK. You used some different tiles in the building, and I liked it. You could always try to add more trees and decoration, though.

I give you 2 stars because, even though it was good, it was very small, and I couldn't feel the experience well. Please try to make larger levels next time.

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 12:56 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
FrozenFire wrote:
asdfmoviecaleb wrote:Will someone please notice my levels they have been completely ignored lately. :?


Well, you should be a little bit more patient. There should be at least one rating your level, being it late or not. ;)

But okay, here we go.

The level was kind of small and easy, to say the truth, but I liked the amount of enemies and the falling Bullet Bills, they gave an extra challenge to the level. But I don't have much to talk about it, only that it was pretty small, and easy, despite the amount of enemies.

The graphics were actually OK. You used some different tiles in the building, and I liked it. You could always try to add more trees and decoration, though.

I give you 2 stars because, even though it was good, it was very small, and I couldn't feel the experience well. Please try to make larger levels next time.
1. YES SAYING SOMEONE NOTICE MY LEVEL ALWAYS WORKS
2.It is supposed to be small, everything is the way it is supposed to be, so I beg you, please change your rating, so I may continue the series.

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 12:59 pm
by l.m
1. For some reason, it works. hhaahahaa...

2. Sorry, but it's based on opinion. If I think the level deserves 2 stars, then I give it two stars. It doesn't matter if you need it to start a new series or not. But, don't let a 2 star rating stop you from doing the series. Just try to improve, and maybe next time I can give you a higher score.

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 3:21 pm
by Awesomeguy 99
You know, I say us two have a bit of a challenge!
Whoever gets the best rated Mario Galaxy series wins! I just thought it would be a fun little thing since both of us started ours at such similar times.

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 28th, 2015, 6:09 pm
by asdfmoviecaleb
awesomeguy 99 wrote:You know, I say us two have a bit of a challenge!
Whoever gets the best rated Mario Galaxy series wins! I just thought it would be a fun little thing since both of us started ours at such similar times.
Umm.. sure!

Re: The Intro-SMG63

PostPosted: March 29th, 2015, 12:56 am
by Supershroom
Have fun dueling yourselves.

However, caleb, you don't need 5 star ratings to keep making levels. A high rating doesn't come from nowhere, you have to deserve it. And in this case, the level is miles away from getting 5 stars. Even if you want it to be so short (which I can't comprehend, an intro can be still a bit longer), you can still make it fun with some platforming or a small puzzle or such, and you can also try to make good graphics. The amount of enemies is too much, it causes some noticeable lag and is really not fun, and using that sling star on the roof was painful due to a ridiculous mass of bullet bills flying at me. Also, water is misplaced (that happens because you refuse to test your levels) and you've placed the sign warning me of the fast flipping platform so that I get hurt as soon as I stop reading the sign. About graphics, the tiling is good at the bottom, but these "airships" above are too tiny and red castle roof tiles do better than lava tiles, these look rather strange. And there are absolutely no decorations, which are really important in an intro IMO.

I give 2 stars as well. For your future galaxy levels, you should remind of adding enough decor and platforming, and avoiding enemy spam. You've already made levels of this quality, so please stick to it. ;)