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Underground Circus
Underground Circus is a map made by ScepticMacta. To get the shine sprite, you have to collect all 8 red coins and all 6 stars to get the star. UPDATE: Map has been updated for more things. More updates soon!

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Well, that was OK. However, you should notice that:

1. You don't need to collect all the silver stars and all the red coins to retrieve the Shine Sprite. All you have to do is to collect either red coins or silver stars.

2. It was actually 9 red coins.

With these things on mind, time to rate your level:

I liked the platforming. I see you created some areas with some mini challenges with silver stars and red coins, and turns out it was pretty non-linear. I like that.
Good amount of enemies (even though in some places you exaggerated with goombas and such, try not to put too much enemies). You could also have put some coins, just so the player can have fun collecting them. Overall, the platforming was okay.

Unfortunately, I can't say the same about the graphics. You only used the same type of block, with different colors. I'd like to see more differentiation and more tile combination. The floating platforms in the sky didn't help either, because they was just placed randomly. No cutoff (as expected) but you could work more in the Graphics area. Try looking into other levels.

And, so, my final score is 3 stars. The level was good, it just needed a bit of decoration and differentiation, and some more little touches in the platforming aspect. Keep the good work, and don't forget to use what I said here to improve!

FrozenFire wrote:Well, that was OK. However, you should notice that:

1. You don't need to collect all the silver stars and all the red coins to retrieve the Shine Sprite. All you have to do is to collect either red coins or silver stars.

2. It was actually 9 red coins.

With these things on mind, time to rate your level:

I liked the platforming. I see you created some areas with some mini challenges with silver stars and red coins, and turns out it was pretty non-linear. I like that.
Good amount of enemies (even though in some places you exaggerated with goombas and such, try not to put too much enemies). You could also have put some coins, just so the player can have fun collecting them. Overall, the platforming was okay.

Unfortunately, I can't say the same about the graphics. You only used the same type of block, with different colors. I'd like to see more differentiation and more tile combination. The floating platforms in the sky didn't help either, because they was just placed randomly. No cutoff (as expected) but you could work more in the Graphics area. Try looking into other levels.

And, so, my final score is 3 stars. The level was good, it just needed a bit of decoration and differentiation, and some more little touches in the platforming aspect. Keep the good work, and don't forget to use what I said here to improve!

Ok, I will change the things and add more to the level and decrease the amount of coins and stars. Thanks for the rating!