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The Top of the Sky
Get all of the 5 red coins in the sky. Think you can do it?

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So, now the deed of judging this level...

It was okay. There was no enemy spam, item spam, lag or loading time which I can appreciate from a new (ish?) creator. The level looked pretty clean, no cutoff and you even had decorations on that one island. It's pretty hard to add decorations when designing a sky area (and sky is mostly empty), so it's okay overall. As for the gameplay, the coins weren't too terribly hidden and weren't riddled with traps. You even added a flying cap section (something I haven't seen being used too often). This is all great, but I think this level would be even better if it were longer. If you maybe added more planets and coins, made the flying section longer and added more challenges it would be better. It's kinda disappointing how short this level is, as the beginning gave an impression of a massive level.

Well anyway, it's a good level nonetheless. 3/5

Konradix wrote:So, now the deed of judging this level...

It was okay. There was no enemy spam, item spam, lag or loading time which I can appreciate from a new (ish?) creator. The level looked pretty clean, no cutoff and you even had decorations on that one island. It's pretty hard to add decorations when designing a sky area (and sky is mostly empty), so it's okay overall. As for the gameplay, the coins weren't too terribly hidden and weren't riddled with traps. You even added a flying cap section (something I haven't seen being used too often). This is all great, but I think this level would be even better if it were longer. If you maybe added more planets and coins, made the flying section longer and added more challenges it would be better. It's kinda disappointing how short this level is, as the beginning gave an impression of a massive level.

Well anyway, it's a good level nonetheless. 3/5

Thanks! Yes I see what you mean. I'll try that.

You have the potential to make good levels, dude. The area around the Toad House is really nicely decorated. However, butterflies in free mid-air are bit distracting, they rather should be near solid ground. Also, the cloud below the Cannon is slightly misplaced and the tipping log after that is shown behind the pipe, so also take care of layering (later placed items appear before previous ones, so if you placed them in the wrong order, you can delete one item or fix the order manually in the code).