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Postby epicness88888888 » April 3rd, 2015, 3:49 pm

The Undersea Dungeon
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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby l.m » April 3rd, 2015, 4:03 pm

Wow. Bravo. I really liked this puzzle. It was pretty clever, and fun to do. The only reasons I have to complain though, is:

- There was not enough coins. I drowned quite some times. But hey, that's what makes the puzzle interesting, I think. Or maybe I wasn't fast enough. But next time you make a water puzzle, try to put some more coins.

- Even if the graphics weren't that bad, I got a little bit bothered by the fact you only used those Brown Bricks for the background. You could experiment new tile combinations, to make the Graphics look less boring. But, to be honest, this is not a big thing.

So, I rate 4 stars. It's not perfect, but it's still pretty awesome. Looking forward to see more work of you.
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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby entertainment.net » April 5th, 2015, 12:27 pm

First off, I played this level and shared my first impressions on YouTube, so if you’d like, you can check out what I have to say there.

Here’s my overall thoughts on the level:
To start, as I say in the video, there’s definitely effort in this level. The doors line-up, there’s plenty of scenery, and there’s no cutoff or areas where you can see the background. So I give you a 5/5 on graphics.

I liked the idea of this level. It’s a constant race against the water meter to metal star or blue coin, to make sure you never drown. This is a concept I’ve never seen done, and it’s well executed.

Now, a few things I didn’t like: While I did like the race against time concept, I did end up moving my starting place because it proved a quite hard, and I hate repeating early parts of levels. This has always been an issue with Super Mario 63 though, so I’ll excuse it.
The other thing was enemy placement. I kept coming out of doors and spawning right in the middle of enemies, taking unavoidable damage. I looked at the level editor, and looks like the enemies are fairly far from the doors, but maybe you still need to do a little tweaking and testing to fix the problem.

Overall, I really enjoyed this level. As I said, the concept is solid and novel, and the problems are minimal at most.
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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby epicness88888888 » April 5th, 2015, 2:03 pm

i personally can't get over the fact you made a video with my level, that was cool, but you forgot the Alt. music...
(shameless self-promotion) if you want another good level, try my Xeadian star ship (SHIP not base) or Pharaoh Epicis' Temple :) if you want another water level to rage at, :troll: , try my Lake of the Dead Koopa Level. thanks for the rating!

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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby Supershroom » April 7th, 2015, 5:52 am

Is this level impossible to beat? Did you forget to add a switch at the beginning?
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5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby epicness88888888 » April 7th, 2015, 8:07 am

it's not impossible, click on the youtube link up there, he figured it out
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Re: The Undersea Dungeon

Postby Supershroom » April 7th, 2015, 10:29 pm

♥♥♥♥ me I could swear I would never ever overlook a door, even if it's violet and covered by basement tiles

judging-wise, FF has pretty much covered me already, I also give 4 stars. And I see that this got downrated. Maybe the downrater also overlooked a door.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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Supershroom
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