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Postby Awesomeguy 99 » April 6th, 2015, 2:49 pm

Forest Dungeon
Welcome to the start of the dungeon series.
STORY:
Famous treasure hunter Mario "Jumpman" Mario is out for more in the Eluryh Region. There are many different Dungeons in this region, Mario plans to conquer them all.
MEDALS
These are based on how many coins you have by the end.

Platinum Medal: 202 Coins
Gold Medal: 175 Coins
Silver Medal: 145 Coins
Bronze Medal: 125 Coins
Star Medal: 100 Coins
Nopon Medal: 50 Coins
Yarn Medal: 25 Coins
Paper Medal: 10 or below Coins


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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby asdfmoviecaleb » April 6th, 2015, 4:03 pm

Wait what happened to our duel r u giving up?
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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby Awesomeguy 99 » April 6th, 2015, 4:06 pm

asdfmoviecaleb wrote:Wait what happened to our duel r u giving up?

I'm not giving up, just taking a small break for a little bit.
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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby asdfmoviecaleb » April 6th, 2015, 4:46 pm

awesomeguy 99 wrote:
asdfmoviecaleb wrote:Wait what happened to our duel r u giving up?

I'm not giving up, just taking a small break for a little bit.
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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby Konradix » April 7th, 2015, 12:38 am

I had 201 coins. I'm guessing I didn't pick up a coin from an enemy or something.

Now for the review and rating.

It was okay. I liked the exploration factor and the incentive to do so (since you're challenged to get as many coins as you can get). However the platforming didn't pose that much of a challenge, especially when you get the FLUDD. I have noted a few things while playing your level though:
- When you're fighting the Bullies, the Big Bully can get stuck on the pipe you have to go through. It's possible to kill him, but maybe move the pipe a little bit just to make sure he won't get stuck.
- At the top of the level there's this pyramid thing right after the transition. You can get stuck inside of it. You can get out of it, but maybe switch it with straight floor.

Now for the graphics... The tileset is all over the place. First you're using Jungle tiles and Volcano tiles, then switch to Grass tiles and desert tiles, and then you go back to Volcano tiles and those weird special tiles... I'm not saying variety is bad, not at all, but the level just isn't consistant. You have an immediate switch of atmosphere just by going though a transition. If this makes any sense. There's a little bit of cutoff at the beginning, but that aspect is generally good. As for decorations/items, I can't say that I'm amazed. You've seem to put a tree or two once in a while. It's pretty lacking in my opinion, and maybe if you added some stuff it would look better.

And last, but not least, no lag, loading time and enemy spam. Always appreciated.

So I'm gonna rate it 2/5. It's not terrible, but it's not great either.

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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby Supershroom » April 7th, 2015, 2:23 am

Yeah, the thing with the pyramid you can get stuck in if you enter the transition from the left side. I've also encountered this problem in one of my earlier levels, where I've forgot to lock the left side of a transition which made it possible to skip an entire section of it. Just fill the holes in the pyramid or put some tiles on the left side, and the problem is solved.

I've actually enjoyed this level fun-wise and I'd rate it something like an 7.5/10 in Fun if I had to judge. I rate this three stars. For Fun, you're already pretty good, now the next step for you is to develop in graphics, you actually have the potential. Look at levels from awesome designers (the MoD's, Star king's, MP3's, Nin's, Yuri's etc.) and you see how you can do it.
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Re: Forest Dungeon

Postby asdfmoviecaleb » April 7th, 2015, 4:51 am

I pretty much enjoyed the level. I thought the variety was really somthing special (i no coming from a person that nevr uses any)
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