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Postby ovidiu2007 » April 7th, 2015, 9:47 am

enemy on a platform
this is a demo.
wait:
-to next 3 levels;1 week
-to another levels: undefined


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Re: enemy on a platform

Postby Awesomeguy 99 » April 7th, 2015, 2:06 pm

This is the worst lag my computer has EVER had. dropping below 5 FPS.
Not only that, but the pipes are pointless and the level is very ugly.
Also, the grammar Nazi inside of me is dying because of all the signs.
Also, you warned about Bullies, but there aren't even any bullies in the level.
And the list goes on, I'm sorry but I'm giving 1 star, there was very little effort I could see and I didn't have any fun. I know you've made good levels before, you can do much better.
Might be ready in a bit.

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Re: enemy on a platform

Postby l.m » April 7th, 2015, 2:15 pm

Also rating 1 star.

Honestly, ovidiu, this is the borderline between one star and getting deleted from the level portal.

Improve, before it's too late.
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Re: enemy on a platform

Postby ~Yuri » April 7th, 2015, 6:31 pm

Ovidiu, we've given many, many advices before. You have even been warned once. Next time me or any other LeMod see another level of this tier, you will receive another warning.

Make your levels better before it's late. And I say that because if your levels continue on this quality standard, we will prevent you from even posting any more levels on the portal.
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Re: enemy on a platform

Postby Supershroom » April 7th, 2015, 10:32 pm

Saki, there's a shiny report button on top of each posts. You can also use it to report a level if you think it should be removed from the portal.

ovidiu, if you want to know why your levels are mostly spam and what you can do to avoid making spam levels, try reading this. Demo levels without a shine and with so many annoyances are also spam levels. Also, if you had tested the thing, you would have noticed how much it lags.
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