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Postby ovidiu2007 » April 15th, 2015, 4:26 am

bob-omb factory
bob-omb factory

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Re: bob-omb factory

Postby Supershroom » April 15th, 2015, 7:27 am

Even though this is better than before, it still asks for more, especially graphics-wise. Just take the lava cutoff at the start. You want this to be a kind of factory, but it's just an accumulation of bricks, especially the end to the right looks extremely bland. Some items are out of place or not accurately placed (use the Ctrl button to adjust item placement better), and the amount of bob-ombs to the left is not laggy, but still superflous. The flames in the middle are very narrow and not finely in sync to each other, while I thought I would be safe with going down the next step, I get hit from all off a sudden. Needs a bit more playtesting. Furthermore, I'm not sure if you really try to let your grammar and spelling be as good as you can. Some typos even differ from how the word is pronounced (e.g. warming instead of warning).

All in all, 2 stars. It's worthy to be on the portal, but you can still do much better.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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Re: bob-omb factory

Postby ovidiu2007 » April 28th, 2015, 5:06 am

hint:
stay on the last two bones circles to defenese flames.
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Re: bob-omb factory

Postby Supershroom » April 28th, 2015, 5:21 am

Lol then I don't have any chance to reach the red coins below, if that is what you're trying to say.

The left flamethrower is on for 10 frames and off for 145 frames, while the right one is on for 37 frames and off for 65 frames. That's really confusing to figure out. It's still possible to get through of course, but still not fun.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

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