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bob-omb factory

PostPosted: April 15th, 2015, 4:26 am
by ovidiu2007
bob-omb factory
bob-omb factory

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Re: bob-omb factory

PostPosted: April 15th, 2015, 7:27 am
by Supershroom
Even though this is better than before, it still asks for more, especially graphics-wise. Just take the lava cutoff at the start. You want this to be a kind of factory, but it's just an accumulation of bricks, especially the end to the right looks extremely bland. Some items are out of place or not accurately placed (use the Ctrl button to adjust item placement better), and the amount of bob-ombs to the left is not laggy, but still superflous. The flames in the middle are very narrow and not finely in sync to each other, while I thought I would be safe with going down the next step, I get hit from all off a sudden. Needs a bit more playtesting. Furthermore, I'm not sure if you really try to let your grammar and spelling be as good as you can. Some typos even differ from how the word is pronounced (e.g. warming instead of warning).

All in all, 2 stars. It's worthy to be on the portal, but you can still do much better.

Re: bob-omb factory

PostPosted: April 28th, 2015, 5:06 am
by ovidiu2007
hint:
stay on the last two bones circles to defenese flames.

Re: bob-omb factory

PostPosted: April 28th, 2015, 5:21 am
by Supershroom
Lol then I don't have any chance to reach the red coins below, if that is what you're trying to say.

The left flamethrower is on for 10 frames and off for 145 frames, while the right one is on for 37 frames and off for 65 frames. That's really confusing to figure out. It's still possible to get through of course, but still not fun.