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The next level in my series. Boss: Melty Magma Mess (failed attempt at fire Peewee piranha) . There is a secret star somewhere. How many SMG series do we have going on right now? 3. F------ 3.
Alt music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q03yzji1erU "Boss" music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpK59PKhSz4

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Supershroom wrote:I see that you've put effort into this, but the cut-off really hurts. Those two don't fit well together even when replacing the highest cave ground tiles (at the border to jungle tiles) with top tiles. Cave should rather be mixed with grass or desert. There's also lava cutoff at the middle and at the end of the level. If you want lava to "flow" out off a wall, try to enclose it with disabled flame towers. Furthermore, the tower area is very bland and rushed (it would be better to travel directly to the other side of the tower instead of having this, since the area outside of the tower looked good), and after that there's a bit too many enemies and some lag therefore, and at the end there's the glitch with the hitbox of a diagonal flame tower, which means that there's no safe spot while climbing up.

Gave it 3.25 --> 3 stars. You're not far away from 4 or even 5, just pay more attention to bugs and tiling.

ChaosYoshi wrote:First off, I want to point out that forced damage is almost never a good idea. The start of your level is a good example of what not to do, as you're flung straight into a Koopa. There's also a few other points where it happens because an enemy is in a slingstar landing spot. It doesn't happen all the time, but having forced damage as a random element is not good design either. Otherwise, your level is alright. A bit of decoration sprinkled throughout, but there were also some ugly bits, such as those cave tiles clashing with the jungle ones. The water on that planetoid didn't look pretty either, as you had to place multiple instances of water because of the planetoids structure. If you want it to look nice, you should not cripple yourself with something like tile arrangement that you can easily change. There's also the exposed planet cores, which you only use twice: once to introduce the element, and again on a single different planet where there was practically no point in having it. Speaking of unneeded things, why is there that lone red coin? It serves no other purpose than letting the player reach the normal Shine Sprite as the secret one requires a Silver Star, which is also pointless. The red coin can also be easily missed by people that decide to bounce off the line of Parakoopas, too. And the placement of the normal Shine Sprite is just awful, as the floor below the Shine Sprite is lava which makes it so that you cannot complete the level regardless.

Aside from all that stuff I just ranted on your level, it's alright. You could definitely make a lot of improvements, but I would rate it at about 2.5/5, which I will round to 3.