Level 1-Koopa Ship

[four1234]

Level 1-Koopa Ship
Hello!! Today weather is so hot... Anyway Today I made a New Level=Level 1-Koopa Ship!! But This Level is So!!!!!!!!!!!! Simple... Sorry.. ㅠㅠ

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[PaperMarioFan1000]

This is good, Unfortunately, THe Level is TOO short and Too little enemies, I suggest you to remake this level to be cooler

[TheExcavator]

I have nothing really to say other than that I felt this level lacked substance. Length isn't the only issue here, although it is one of the more glaringly obvious problems that can be jumped on. How can I put this? The level lacks gameplay at all, it lacks the sort of challenge that I like to look for. The only platforming challenge in the level is completely skippable just by damage boosting through the fire tower.

My advice would be to make levels that actually have some gameplay, some "meat" to it. It doesn't have to be a super long mega epic level by any means but you need to put in a bit more work than you are currently putting in.

1/5. I wish you the best on improving.

[PaperMarioFan1000]

You can just make another one, Easy, and Simple. Well That would be a good idea, Semi-Bosses (Enemies that act as a boss of level). And more enemies to make it even harder