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Postby C.Rock » May 21st, 2015, 3:46 am

Venture to the forgotten kingdom
My first level. Mario receives a letter from famous koopa professor Kolorado,but something other than the professor awaits him.........

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Re: Venture to the forgotten kingdom

Postby Supershroom » May 21st, 2015, 10:35 am

Ouch, that cutoff at the start hurt. It's better to mix solid brick tiles with background instead of natural ground tiles.

The level was very straightforward and incredibly short though being 200 tiles in length. It lacks pretty much everything you would want to see when playing a good level. Try harder next time, I'd say.
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Re: Venture to the forgotten kingdom

Postby minecraft » May 21st, 2015, 11:51 am

Thanks for the advice. I used to have a profile on the old portal but I some how deleted it. I then forgot about it and haven't made a level since 2012. So i'm trying to regain my former glory bu i am going to take it slow so i can regain all knowledge i have lost. :ninja:
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Re: Venture to the forgotten kingdom

Postby Karyete » May 21st, 2015, 12:22 pm

Wait, are you and C.Rock the same person?
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Re: Venture to the forgotten kingdom

Postby C.Rock » May 21st, 2015, 4:17 pm

No i didn't realize I was logged in on my friends account. :facepalm:
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