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Postby ovidiu2007 » June 19th, 2015, 4:07 am

Trap piramid
Mario has teleported to the trap piramid by Commorade luck.

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Re: Trap piramid

Postby InvalidSega » August 1st, 2015, 2:25 pm

Good level, ovidiu2007. Here is your first 5 stars.
Tiling: Very good
Item placement: Excellent
Glitches: 0
Bad spots: 0
Challenge: Difficult
5/5. Wonderful, ovidiu2007, it's your first 5 star rated level I have seen!
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Re: Trap piramid

Postby Pawn12 » August 1st, 2015, 5:08 pm

Though the level is short. Pretty neat Item placement, I didn't find Tiling breath-taking, and I really like the fire part. 4/5!
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Re: Trap piramid

Postby Supershroom » August 2nd, 2015, 1:20 am

The tiling shall be very good, InvalidSega? The opposite is true. Putting the same tile everywhere is unaesthetic, bland and a poor effort.

Even the gameplay is confusing, e.g. that door which directly throws you back to a room you've visited already (classic troll, typical for ovidiu). Or meeting a flame coming out of nowhere at the start, and then going through exactly this room when you wait for ages until the flames go out, but no, they're DISABLED! This is a 2 stars and nothing more. (EDIT: in my books I forgot to say)
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Re: Trap piramid

Postby Vajrin » August 3rd, 2015, 5:16 am

Mediocre, not bad and not good. So I rated 3 stars.
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Re: Trap piramid

Postby l.m » August 3rd, 2015, 8:42 am

Oh man so many different ratings

Who should I trust

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I actually thought this was a decent level. You improved the graphics a looooooooot since the last time I gave you a judging. Platforming was nice; you had good concepts but please, remember to always test the level and search for minor platforming mistakes, so the player can have an even better experience (example: telling me there's a flame thrower ahead, or removing some flame thrower from certain places so platforming doesn't stay unfair) and so.

Rating 3 stars, but that was a close 2 stars, so pay attention to the little things next time.
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Re: Trap piramid

Postby ovidiu2007 » September 19th, 2015, 10:57 pm

Thanks, InvalidSega. Also, you must know that door up leads to a previuous room, where you got a 1up. So, that is all. :|
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