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Hello, and welcome to my very first level! It's, as you can probably tell from the title, a spinoff of Super Mario Galaxy. As of now, it's sort of a demo, only having 2 levels. I spent a lot of time on this, so please give feedback (I don't mind any criticism, as long as it helps me make the level nicer) Most of the stuff you see right now will probably be changed, as this is still a W.I.P. With all that said, here's the code to the level!

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Hope you enjoy it! (And if you don't, give me feedback so I can make it better)

It's generally recommended not to post unfinished levels on the portal, no matter how long they take to finish. Some very good levels here have required two weeks or a month or more.

I'm gonna wait with a review until you're done with this, but I'll just notice that there is cutoff beneath the metal mesh, and you also shouldn't try to fill all of your 500x500 space due to lag / loading time reasons.

There REALLY needed to be a transition in this level somewhere. I couldn't even do a double jump because I couldn't time the jump with all of the lag I was experiencing. I also fell through the VERY first mushroom, unable to do anything about it. I can't really rate the level until I can actually play it. The lag is just way too harsh.

You can't post levels that are in "Beta" or "Demo", just save it and finish it. The level in general was mediocre, and I think it's only for people who never played this game before since you put tutorials in the signs.

Sorry about the lag, as It worked perfectly when I tested it. When I'm done with it,I'll add transitions. As for that cutoff,i'll fix that. Thanks for feedback!

EDIT: I added some transitions to (Hopefully) reduce the lag, as well as another star to get I happened to be working on. I probably won't update the code anymore until I'm done.

There, the level can be played now. It isn't a bad level, but I know I said to add some transitions but the very first one was pretty unneeded as it makes the jump super hard to do, and I would have put it in the spot where you go through the pipe, and border it with Tiles. The same can be said when you enter the area that goes to GreenGrass Galaxy and do the exact thing there. There's also a little bit of cut off in the upper part of the GreenGrass Galaxy where you finish jumping off of the switch controlled blocks. My last tip would to add more scenery, because the level looks kind of bland. But I got a good bit of enjoyment out of the level, and I think it deserves 3 stars.

Also, I called the Hover FLUDD in my SMG63 series a Hoverpack, did you get that from me?