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Level 1-1 Remake (Super Mario Bros.)

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Postby lucas5201 » July 25th, 2015, 1:23 am

Hello
I share my 1-1 remake of Super Mario Bros.


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Re: Level 1-1 Remake (Super Mario Bros.)

Postby Mr Pop » July 26th, 2015, 10:25 pm

Amazing level! Just like the original! I like how you also added in a cannon. You have a few cutoff tiles and you could maybe a bit more scenery. c: 4/5
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Re: Level 1-1 Remake (Super Mario Bros.)

Postby Supershroom » July 26th, 2015, 11:27 pm

This is by no means amazing. This is one of hundreds of SMB 1-1 remakes we have already, and as said, lots of cutoff and no scenery. Total flatness, and the blocks in the "secret" room don't contain any coins, which means it's no worth at all to visit it. The cannon is pointless. This was plain, empty and unoriginal, therefore I rate 1 star. Sorry, but that's just what it is.
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Re: Level 1-1 Remake (Super Mario Bros.)

Postby Awesomeguy 99 » July 27th, 2015, 12:27 pm

Like Supershroom Said, there's hundreds of 1-1 Remakes out there already and the level is pretty small and bland. I would suggest if you want to make a level like this, add some sort of twist, for example, say, you made it reversed, or have some different content than the original while still being close to the original. It's accurate, but its just too bland and normal for me. I'll give it 2 stars.
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Re: Level 1-1 Remake (Super Mario Bros.)

Postby Link Osorio » July 27th, 2015, 4:32 pm

This remake level was very easy and the secret area does not have coins but is a good level.


I rated the level with 3 stars.
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