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SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

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Postby InvalidSega » July 26th, 2015, 8:11 am

SM63 Redeseigned 1-1
This is my third level and the begin of my series.
Tip: For the newcomers, this is recommended, because my level have the main controls


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Re: SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

Postby Pawn12 » July 27th, 2015, 6:36 pm

For being a tutorial, It does its job. The level itself is bland, Straight forward, and a bit boring. 3/5. We got plenty of tutorials...
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Re: SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

Postby Goldy301 » July 27th, 2015, 7:18 pm

They're too many things flying like the bushes and signs and why's there an ice platform in a jungle tile? (Unless you have a pretty good reason) 2/5 because you're still beginner and learning. Even I'm like that in my level called The Lost Loot. Also in the sign says press x or space bar to launch you can't use x to launch yourself in cannon. The tutorial seems a little helpful but most of the people post levels already know how to play.
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Re: SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

Postby Awesomeguy 99 » July 27th, 2015, 8:00 pm

Most people who come to the forums have played the game, so I don't think a tutorial was necessary (Unless you made some sort of new mechanic, but I don't know how you'd do that) and the level was pretty small. It could have definitely used some more work but I think it deserves 2 stars at most.
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Re: SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

Postby Supershroom » July 28th, 2015, 4:03 am

C is what lets you shoot out of the cannon. Smart attempt at making a tutorial, though you could have indeed used more space and especially introduce all FLUDDs with some FLUDD-specific gameplay, and some more moves like e.g. dive-jump and wide jumping after taking an in-run (double-tap left or right).

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Re: SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

Postby InvalidSega » July 30th, 2015, 4:11 am

Pawn12 wrote:For being a tutorial, It does its job. The level itself is bland, Straight forward, and a bit boring. 3/5. We got plenty of tutorials...

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