SM63 Redeseigned 1-1

[InvalidSega]

SM63 Redeseigned 1-1
This is my third level and the begin of my series.
Tip: For the newcomers, this is recommended, because my level have the main controls

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[Pawn12]

For being a tutorial, It does its job. The level itself is bland, Straight forward, and a bit boring. 3/5. _{We got plenty of tutorials...}

[Goldy301]

They're too many things flying like the bushes and signs and why's there an ice platform in a jungle tile? (Unless you have a pretty good reason) 2/5 because you're still beginner and learning. Even I'm like that in my level called The Lost Loot. Also in the sign says press x or space bar to launch you can't use x to launch yourself in cannon. The tutorial seems a little helpful but most of the people post levels already know how to play.

[Awesomeguy 99]

Most people who come to the forums have played the game, so I don't think a tutorial was necessary (Unless you made some sort of new mechanic, but I don't know how you'd do that) and the level was pretty small. It could have definitely used some more work but I think it deserves 2 stars at most.

[Supershroom]

C is what lets you shoot out of the cannon. Smart attempt at making a tutorial, though you could have indeed used more space and especially introduce all FLUDDs with some FLUDD-specific gameplay, and some more moves like e.g. dive-jump and wide jumping after taking an in-run (double-tap left or right).

We got plenty of tutorials...

definitely not so many as SMB 1-1 remakes.

[InvalidSega]

For being a tutorial, It does its job. The level itself is bland, Straight forward, and a bit boring. 3/5. _{We got plenty of tutorials...}

If this is good if your mini sentence is 650 in size?
-InvalidSega