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SM63R: World 2-1
Sorry, I have no other ideas for World 2-1. I make this her. I hope you enjoy, this time!

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*Sigh* Okay. The level is bad... Before you freak out, let me tell you why! Tiling in the first area is Weird, there are way too many enemies, and The level decoration is Vacant.

Now, The first pit was dumb, No signs or signals to jump, and if you are like me, you don't really care to zoom out unless it is necessary.

Next, Here is a little equation that I Know you'll understand... More enemies = More lag.

Finally, Due to the lack of Pizzazz, the level looks really unfinished.

1/5. Git gud.

The biggest flaw with this is simply that you've submitted this way too fast. You can do better if you spend some more time on it.

I'm sorry to say but this level managed to become disastrous. The graphics are garbage, the scenery you placed is unacceptable. Too many enemies causes somewhat lag. The gameplay itself is too short for fun to begin. Try improving and increase the length longer for the level and stop rushing these levels, try putting some effort into them. I don't mean to be cruel, just telling you on what you need to fix. Sadly, my rating for this level is a 1/5

Good day kind sir.

There's a lot of unnecessary enemies, the entire tunnel of Fly Guys is pointless because you can't even do a triple jump to get to the tunnel. The only way to progress is to jump through the part where there were some stairs. Decoration wasn't even there and the jump into the sandy area killed me the first time because I didn't know where to go so I just did a double jump and fell to my doom. The Pyramid also didn't have any background tiles so it just seemed like less of a Pyramid and more of a random structure. We tell you that the levels aren't good because we want you to be able to improve on your mistakes. A plus though is that there isn't any lag but just a really tiny bit of lag can be helped if the level is good.

I certainly feel bad for you but the pyramid inside has lots of enemies and they are unnecessary,we don't bother going there to attack them. Also add some walls to cover the background,it's like the pyramid inside is not a pyramid. When you enter the door the pyramid doesn't look like much,add some slopes to make it like that. This level is poor,therefore I add 1 star. I know you spend lots of effort but it's just poor. Do not immediately post level and check some mistakes. People make awesome levels do not take 1 day but weeks. Please improve.

I will not work on 2-2 if you do not rate high.

InvalidSega wrote:I will not work on 2-2 if you do not rate high.

I understand you want people to enjoy your levels, but this level was just...bad. There's no other real way to put it. Its short, bland, and easy. There's lots of room for improvement, but this level just isn't good.

Sorry, I quit forever Runouw. Bye.