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1 Minute Till Death!

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Postby boyam99 » August 8th, 2015, 1:42 pm

1 Minute Till Death!
In this level you have 1 miniute ultil death!

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Re: 1 Minute Till Death!

Postby Pawn12 » August 9th, 2015, 5:40 pm

Short level considering there is only a minute to complete it. Not really much of a challenge. 3/5.

I don't normally do this but, You might want to make the level larger. Add parts that would make it seem tense yet fun. An example would be you reach a wall and you must find an area of it to break. That, in my opinion, would be cool. If you do use it, You should put it at the end, You know... like a final challenge.
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Re: 1 Minute Till Death!

Postby Jumbo101 » August 9th, 2015, 7:16 pm

WOW this is bad.
Sorry but the level itself is painfully horrible.
1/5 from me, sorry but I just think it hits rock
bottom really hard. The concept is good though.
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Re: 1 Minute Till Death!

Postby Supershroom » August 9th, 2015, 11:14 pm

This is not 3/5, this is 0/5. Reasons:

  • Cutoff right at the start, and the rest being only switch tiles, with no specific order at all, very messy. No scenery at all.
  • No plants, no coins, or such. Just random enemies placed around. Close to enemy spam.
  • 1 minute is waaaaaay too lenient for this, even with the 1-ups.
  • Overall, this is a very poor effort.
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Re: 1 Minute Till Death!

Postby Vajrin » August 10th, 2015, 2:32 am

I finished this level less than 15 seconds. It was terrible, very poor graphics, poor gameplay and I saw some cutoffs in this level. So 1/5 stars.
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Re: 1 Minute Till Death!

Postby Goldy301 » August 10th, 2015, 4:33 am

There are cutoffs in the beginning of the level. The level was plain with just enemies,you spammed a little of enemies. 60 seconds is way to long and I finished only 12 seconds. This level makes me uncomfortable by the feeling of it. 1/5
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