Bully's Castle (Secret Level)

[cliffy987]

Bully's Castle (Secret Level)
One day while Mario was hopping around Lethal Lava Land he stumbled into a painting taking him to bully's castle. Also I'm very sorry about my last level it was... really really bad... so i'm hoping people will like this one. (Part 3 was going to be something else but there was a weird glitch and... it was just bad ;-;)

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[Pawn12]

Let me start off with an apology. I'm sorry. I was a bit too harsh with my previous review on Crash Dash.

Now on with the review. Better than the last level, but not Great.

Part 1: This part was bland and easy. The few decorations you had were poorly placed, except the gate which was alright. There is not much else to say about here other than add more decoration and fix up the thing.

Part 2: Sadly, this is the only part I found a hint of challenge. There is a lot of unused room, lost potential. The flippy floppy's are way to close together.

Part 3a: You could have deleted all of the unused area and put Part 3b in there.

Part 3b: It looks really weird and awkward. The floating lava and platforms. It honestly looks unfinished.

Part 4: If it were not for the bully getting out before pushing the button, you would be able to skip this part. You put the shine on the same platform as the fight so you may skip it as well. The platform is too high so when yo knock the bully off the edge, it gets stuck and dies. lowering the plat would solve this problem.

Overall: I will give it a 2/5. It's not an awful level but it could use a fix-up and polish.